Sunday, November 30, 2008

12. Culmination - The Last Hour

They both were so happy to see each other. Sadia seemed to be so much confused and puzzled, not knowing what to say. For a minute, Saqi wondered if she is the same girl who used to talk with him for hours and who has shared so many important things with him. But maybe it was obvious, as it was the first time and she didn’t want to spoil it by saying anything just like that. It’s actually quite difficult to comprehend what she would have been thinking at that moment. She was with a person who meant a lot to her and somehow wanted him to realize the same. As Saqi didn’t know much about that place as it was the first time he had visited, Sadia took him over to some café where they could sit and talk for some time as normal friends would have done. They were yet trying to make themselves comfortable talking to each other. Had they known that, this was the last hour they had, to get to know and talk to each other, they wouldn’t have wasted even a minute doing that. It wasn’t even an hour that they had met, not even an hour of happiness, and the most unexpected thing happened, or may be, the most expected. Guess what ..!!.. It was Sadia’s dad at the café. Saqi just didn’t even notice a person coming inside with such a rant and rave. He was just about to take that next sip of his cappuccino, when Sadia with such an innocent but very much busted voice, said, “Saqi..!!..My dad”. It wasn’t until then that Saqi even looked up. He was just busy with his cup of coffee and contemplating what to say. Saqi turned to his right and her dad stood just towards the middle adjacent right side of the table. Saqi looked up. “Salaam, How are you uncle”, were his first of words. Burning fumes could be smelt and felt around. Uncle-Ji didn’t even reply back, neither did he at least greet Saqi with a w-salaam, nothing; just deep silence. Saqi could comprehend what it’s going to bring. Sadia’s dad asked her to come outside. By the time, Saqi couldn’t think anything so just cleared the café bill and just hoped and prayed that everything should be fine. Sadia came inside and asked Saqi that her dad has called him outside. Saqi, though a little petrified, came outside the café to meet her dad and again he didn’t reply to Saqi and walked towards his car and asked Sadia to tell him to sit inside the car. Sadia was tensed and this was clearly visible on her face. She had somehow stopped her tears but could be easily seen in her eyes.

Saqi knew that there was nothing to get actually worried and as they have not done anything wrong that couldn’t be justified, everything should be fine and this was what he told Sadia at the moment, and so he told her to ask her dad if he wanted to talk to him and why would he simply sit inside in someone’s car who can’t even reply back to him. Saqi too, from inside was a little vexed but as he looked at Sadia, he thought that he has to somehow act strong to at least talk to her dad and clear everything, whatever is in their mind as Sadia would not be able to explain everything to them.

10 comments:

Huda said...

I had this doubt b4 as its Sadia's place anybody of her acquaintance may see them and create a blunder out of nothing.

The most unexpected and unwanted incident, hmmmmmm eager to know further

Anyways Hope Saqi will take an intelligent step and can save Sadia.

qurat said...

wooooooooooow ths story took my heart away...poor sadia..eager to knw further write fast

Safita said...

hmmmmm...its becoming intresting
...poor people..they had not even started their talk and dad makes an entry!

Anonymous said...

ok....so this is the last hour together..looks like destiny wants to play a really harsh game...
all i can do is warn them to be prepared for the unexpected upcomings..n avoid any possible mishaps...may be god deliberately wants to see them thru this phase for some certain reason...so its now necessary tht they get stronger than ever....

Anonymous said...

Now this is getting harder and harder for me... This is much more difficult for me to relate to due to my kind of education... Don't get me wrong I completely respect the situation and can understand it but it is very hard for me to relate to from the father's perspective.
Saqi and Sadia have done nothing wrong so however unaccessible Sadia's father is I would try to have a reasonable conversation with him and try to understand where he is coming from?... why his outrage?...
I pray this may all bring a good light to Saqi and Sadia's relationship... being it whatever it will be ... friendship or love...

jawed said...

This is so bad that I see it happening so soon. Her dad as it seems to me is not an understanding person at all. After all Sadia is his daughter and he should have complete trust in her. I dont know why people never respect the friendship between a boy and a girl Why do they always think thers is something wrong. I fear what if Saqi never gets to clarify that what Sadia wanted was not possible. The entry of her dad in the scene is going to make it more worse and I feel really sorry for both of them. I hope Saqi makes it all well and Sadia too understands him. I hope her dad tries to understand that the relationship that Sadia and Saqi share is very respectable. Desperately waiting to see what happens and I pray for them that things dont get any worse.

Anonymous said...

oh... so sad... unexpecting incident hapend there...
hhmm Saqi aur Sadia ka yun millna obviously hamari society ko pasnd nhe... aur na hi koi parents pasnd karen gay yeh... lekin aab i think Saqi should explain everything to her Dad taky aur kuch bura na ho...

qurat said...

i wish sadia gts out of trouble..bt saqi being a grt felow went with her just to suport her in tht strang plc....i respect saqi way of behv twrd a grl ..i cn c he understns the pain of sadia

Anonymous said...

i could'nt help but read the whole of it first and then comment....the ease with which you've written and the pains that you've taken to get into a detailed explination of every situation are really worth an applause....Eager to quench my thirst of reading more....!!!!!!!

Anonymous said...

Fools in Love - thts wat happens...

yup saqi loves her too.... i dont think u girls realize tht. and i guess most of u r girls following this story.

anyways thts wat happens to love birds when they do not plan how to evade the hunters.

Love creates a sphere of fairy tale around those in love and they seem to think that nothing can go wrong.

There is a law and u will do good if u always keep it in consideration.... "IF ANYTHING CAN GO WRONG; IT WILL"

Hope there is not a fight sequence comminf up!!!