Friday, November 21, 2008

1. Opening Impressions

It was a Sunday evening and as usual Saqi was busy with his coding practices. Just to take a break amidst, while browsing that night, he came through this profile of a girl named Syed Sadia. He still asks this question to himself as to why he sent a friend request to her; may be he loved that name. But to be really honest, he still does not know, mostly because Saqi was not a kind of person who would squander his time browsing to someone’s profile and then asking for a friendship. But after all what has to happen, happens. So Saqi, not even waiting or expecting any reply, got along with his usual mundane chores that used to keep him quite busy and contented. It was the coming Friday evening and the day was really hectic for Saqi. It was closing time of a project so he usually used to return late from office. It was that night, when he saw a reply from Sadia, a simple "hi" and complimenting some pictures of his native place in his profile. So things kind of started to get along for both of them right from the beginning. Scrapping started between them and Sadia seemed to be a nice girl to him. Just after a day, both started chating and mostly it used to get along for hours and both started to get to know each other. Both exchanged their pics and Sadia though really worried and hoping that this guy would keep her pics safe, even messaged him once that she has full faith in him and she trusted that he would keep her pics safe. She was such an innocent girl. Sadia was really a beautiful girl and both loved to chat with each other. She sometimes used to pick some strange topics about country matters and world-wide terrorism and asked Saqi to give his view on the same, though in real she was not a kind of person who actually cared for that. Later she told Saqi that her friends asked her to check his views on these matters so that they would get to know his personal views or if his thoughts are biased towards some particular thing. Still don’t know what was in their mind or what they wanted to figure out with that. Saqi was not the kind of person who would let himself get involved in such talks but then he had to speak something now when he was asked to. He found explaining such stuffs to her a little difficult through chats, so he asked for her mobile number and called her. Ahh..!! Her sweet voice was like a ten year old kid and as she was a little scared to begin, Saqi tried to make her as comfortable on phone as possible. It could be easily figured out that even she was not a kind of person who would really like to talk about such matters or even cared for these things and that someone has really compelled her to ask for this. Her initial say hearing to Saqi's voice was that he is a rude type of boy with arrogance and attitude which however turned to be quite different later, but that is a different part of the story. There was some kind of pureness in her voice that kept Saqi talking to her and of course with the course of time, she too loved talking to him.

11 comments:

Dona said...

Awesome dude!! Keep up the good work.

Write the second part soon.

Anonymous said...

itz really nice..

Unknown said...

hmmmmmmmm.......as its my name i would love 2 read this dear it happens i wish it gets complete*******

Anonymous said...

mmmmmmm..well shuhab, I must say,..a genuine and effortless start..with no brags and no pretentions.....was quite imbued with the innocence in characters..every detail brought alive with perfect simplicity....bt hope it doesnt go beyond mystery..plzz try not to make it a tragic story haan...hve my fingers crossed....;)

Huda said...

Shuhaaaaaaaaaab ye kiski story hai, saqi to aap ho aur (saqi ki sab qualities hamari jaisi hain) but ye sadia kouan hai?????????????????????

Huda said...

ye tera milna ittefaq tha ya kismat
hum to gum the apni raahoun me
aagayi kaise tum in nigahoun me
HAAL soch k dimag hai hairan
najane banega MAAZI ya MUSTAQBIL
ye soch k dil hai Pareshaan

HUDA

Anonymous said...

hey its really nice... keep it up... best of luck...

Anonymous said...

ummmmmm....
a soft love story of the cyber age begins...
Hope it does not have a harsh ending like the traditional ones.
But then, it seems, to make a memorable story the ending needs to be catastrophic.

jawed said...

You have done a very nice start dude. I am sure that its going to be the best story I have ever read.

qurat said...

it a swet stry.add to the beauty of grl.her hair her lukz tht gv dimension to srty n ya dn jump to conclusins to erly cuz evn if it hs hapnd so fst wn u write u hv to mk it mre n mre itresting

Anonymous said...

They don't have to make the movie... I close my eyes and I see it through every word, every simple sentence...

I'm convinced this will be the best friendship v/s love story ever and I can only expect a tear drop here and there :-)... can't wait!!! I'll be posted untill the end...

Your the best ;-)